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Proud lady

 
 
joe1949
 
Reply Thu 12 Feb, 2004 05:45 pm
She's all alone in the corner
Little dog by her side
Hands around the cup
To take the cold away.

Look at her face with a tear in my eye
Old shoes badly worn
One without a lace
Walks for hours on end.

Won't take a bus
Should I give her money?
She wouldn't take it anyway
Proud lady can't offend.

She stand in the pouring rain
With dog faithful friend
I didn't see her all this week
In the cafe or anywere.

Something's wrong I must inquire,
She could be ill,
Living alone
I'll never forget that sad day.

Proud lady passed away
The only thing I could give her,
Was flowers on her grave.
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Letty
 
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Reply Thu 12 Feb, 2004 06:13 pm
so sad. So lovely. Crying or Very sad ..You are getting better, my friend.
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Reply Fri 13 Feb, 2004 01:26 am
That's really good. Great ending too.
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joe1949
 
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Reply Fri 13 Feb, 2004 11:43 am
thank you to you both Leety your comments keep me going. I am learning ans still hopefully improve
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