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I do not feel naked.

 
 
Reply Thu 12 Feb, 2004 12:27 am
You were so wrong, I was so right
You were so blinded by the light
You are so lame, I feel no pain
This is sad, but i'm so happy

I took your ring off from my finger
but i do not feel naked.
I take our vows and I break them
and I do not feel naked.

You were so here, I was so gone
I hoped something would go wrong
I am to blame, I am insane
You are sad, soon you'll be happy

I took your ring off from my finger
but I do not feel naked.
I take our vows and I break them
and I do not feel naked.
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kerver
 
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Reply Thu 12 Feb, 2004 03:15 am
So is this a good thing or a bad thing? I know I would feel lost without my jewelery.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Thu 12 Feb, 2004 03:31 am
Depends how look at it kerver, I have to say though that in the long run it would definatly be a good thing. Love shouldn't be one sided.
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kerver
 
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Reply Thu 12 Feb, 2004 02:58 pm
Well thanks for sharing this "stand up", I like it. Reminds me of someone. Keep them comin!
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Gibson Chick
 
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Reply Mon 16 Feb, 2004 09:19 pm
Great poem "pessimism"!
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Diane
 
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Reply Mon 16 Feb, 2004 09:23 pm
Pessimism, sounds like you are strong enough to get on with your life. I like how you described your reaction.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 17 Feb, 2004 03:57 am
Thanks Gibson and Diane, I thought the reaction was quite clever if I don't say so myself.
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