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CloudsCried.

 
 
cusick
 
Reply Wed 11 Feb, 2004 08:27 am
Stars grew dim
clouds cried
the night his
love for me died.

I should have told
him before,
never have lied
of my love for another
which drove him wild.

Breathing uneasy
fingers tight
a smothering pressure
I could not fight.

Stars ran to hide
clouds still cried
the night I died.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Wed 11 Feb, 2004 11:15 pm
Cool, I like this. Nice work.
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cusick
 
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Reply Thu 12 Feb, 2004 12:28 pm
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Thank you so much pessimism. Maggie
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darkshade
 
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Reply Thu 12 Feb, 2004 02:22 pm
This is an amazing piece; I can identify with this so well that it feels like you pulled memories from my brain. Thanks for sharing.
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cusick
 
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Reply Thu 12 Feb, 2004 03:07 pm
Yhank you for your comments dark. Maggie
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