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One Thing New to Confusion

 
 
Reply Tue 10 Feb, 2004 10:39 pm
Something not new to me
But something new to my confusion
Stuck in disbelief over one
Is it possible to feel the touch of an illusion?
When you feel that touch does it make it real?
To me it's tangible
I am about to implode from what I feel
My own white teeth are going to chew my own brain
My own stomach is going to digest my eyes
Why does what I feel have to be impassioned lies?
I want to pursue
But I am afraid of you, you and you
I want to express so much
But I guess I will just leave it to the touch
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cusick
 
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Reply Wed 11 Feb, 2004 08:26 am
Very disturbing one Dark. You sound as though you are lost. Cling on tight, Hugs Maggie
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darkshade
 
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Reply Thu 12 Feb, 2004 02:19 pm
Thanks Maggie, strangely this piece is about love, and in a strong sense of the word I am lost in what I need to do about the strange feeling of love. Thanks again for the encouragement and I will hold on tight.

darkshade
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