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A New Place

 
 
Reply Tue 10 Feb, 2004 10:36 pm
Lord you have put me in a strange new place
A place where I can feel the warmth of your face
You have shown me love in two smiles
You have shown me you were there all the while
You never left, it was I
You waited for me to open myself
And I love you so much for not letting me pass by
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theollady
 
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Reply Sun 15 Feb, 2004 09:58 pm
Darkshade,

I am just getting around to reading this.
Very touching and sweet. I like it.
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darkshade
 
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Reply Tue 17 Feb, 2004 06:58 pm
Thank you, I like it to, it is simple but meaningful
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Morning Pages
 
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Reply Thu 19 Feb, 2004 01:24 am
Wow. You said it perfectly.
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