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Gentle (very small poem)

 
 
Reply Mon 9 Dec, 2002 08:45 am

upon winter white
pages
words flow soft
with
summer's warmth

outside the window

....shy violets bloom
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jjorge
 
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Reply Mon 9 Dec, 2002 09:08 am
Sweetpea Very nice
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dupre
 
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Reply Mon 9 Dec, 2002 11:15 am
Nice contrast in winter and warmth. I like the way the lines sort of wrap into each other. "Shy violets bloom" The writer emerges. So much said with so few words. I'm impressed!
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ehBeth
 
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Reply Mon 9 Dec, 2002 07:35 pm
I hear your voice. Thank you.
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