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LOVERS REVENGE

 
 
joe1949
 
Reply Tue 10 Feb, 2004 02:57 pm
She's back silent face behind window
Left without a trace
There is anger, behind her smile
Someone must pay.

The day she was cast for good
But there's a fighter
This is not a happy return
Belive it hell's fire.

Sparks will fly
Every street has its end
So evil men its time to pay
Thats right its judgement day.

You put a rope around his neck
One of you told a lie
Kiss the wind
Sound of thunder.

Every dog has its day
One of you must die
All she wants is justice for her man
Just a couple of kids.

In love with each other
You decided he was guilty
The truth is
He never shot her brother.
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BlueMonkey
 
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Reply Tue 17 Feb, 2004 01:14 am
I like it. Dark. Dark is good. And hidden.
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joe1949
 
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Reply Tue 17 Feb, 2004 06:37 pm
Thanks BlueMonkey glad you liked it.
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BlueMonkey
 
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Reply Wed 18 Feb, 2004 12:47 am
And your avatar freaks me out. Good thing. Don't worry I won't scream.
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joe1949
 
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Reply Fri 20 Feb, 2004 01:41 pm
thought it was a good avatar myself, that's the way i feel in the morning LOL.
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BlueMonkey
 
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Reply Fri 20 Feb, 2004 10:06 pm
That is scary. But scary good.
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