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Reply Mon 9 Feb, 2004 01:21 pm
If I am here and you are there
Is there always betwixt us air?

How will I or you know
how fast 3 blades of grass can grow?
How far do they reach, under the ground
and when they grow, is there the slightest sound?

I take the cars that pass on by
to be like toys coming nigh
The big giants above are rolling them on
with unseen hands, simply having fun

Can you tell me please
Can you help me out?
who decides which doors open in
and which doors open out?

Is my phone ringing loudly
or are my ears super-tuned
to me, I see a small bubble
to an ant, it's a hot air balloon

Could up really be down
and my smile really a frown
if so, would the ground be sky...
and clouds be underground???

Questions questions so many to ask
Answering them is a never ending task
I'll take my chances - why you ask?
to get to the bottom of the question flask.
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Reply Mon 9 Feb, 2004 01:28 pm
I like the opening lines.

The doors opening in or out is also great!
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Reply Mon 9 Feb, 2004 02:14 pm
The person who selects the hinges...

Nice, Onyxelle, I enjoyed it.
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