I need help getting noticed, please help?

I am trying to become a rapper, but i have no recording equipment other than a cell phone which has horrible recording quality!! This is a sample of my rap and i want to know what you think.

(Chorusx2) you only get one...one life one lesson
you only get one...one chance one blessing
you only get one...one time to make it right until the end of your life

(Rap) i cant take it no more, and im so tired
depriving me of everything that i had once desired
it feels like im adding firewood into the fire
now your just a figure of whom i once admired
dont get me wrong....dont get me wrong
cause there is just a frown in which a smile belonged
i still love you i hope you know this
coming across pain we couldnt dismiss
but financial problems man is such a burden your taking out on me
and i dont see the point in trying no more admittedly
cuz u dont realize what your doing then when it all has been done
you have dealt the damage prior which is hard to overcome...
thats why i say...
(Chorusx2) "repeat chorus"