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Thu 5 Feb, 2004 12:34 am
A Cinquain
Your hands
soft and gentle
they hold me in the dark
I hope my hands will be like yours
someday
Hey, cactus. Welcome to A2K.
Your cinquain is lovely. I especially like the first three lines.
It's quite lovely, cactus. Welcome to A2K!
yeah yeah welcome to a2k... one thing...
I hope 'someday' my hands will be like yours.
Someday.
awww Thanks for the great replies everyone you are very encouraging!
cactus, if this cinquain is yours and not someone else's, it would be wise to post it in the category "Original Writing" and not to the "Poetry" category. The poetry section is mostly for poems written by others. I think you will find that you can receive more kudos in the original writing category.
Like your moniker, cactus chick.
Like your moniker, cactus chick.
Like yours, too. Roger. but wouldn't it be better if you changed it to RoGrrrr? Sounds more like a villain, and you know how chicks love to be stung by New Mexico cacti. Ouch!
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