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Tue 3 Feb, 2004 06:34 pm
Why don't you get me
I tell you but you don't listen
You twist what I say
To ensure you won't feel bad
You're selfish and egotistic
You make me so mad
You're a grown man of 30
But still 17
You still feel the need to live in a dream
Wake up, wake up, wake up little man
See, hear and feel what is right in front of you
See me, hear me, feel what I say
If you can't listen, and you can't care
If I am just your rock
Then it isn't fair
Now listen, and understand
You no longer have my hand
I like it. However, on most of your lines you wrote your instead of you're. Look them over.
Quote:Why don't you get me
I tell you but you don't listen
You twist what I say
To ensure you won't feel bad
You're selfish and egotistic
You make me so mad
You're a grown man of 30
But still 17
You still feel the need to live in a dream
Thanks Individual for pointing those mistakes out to me, and for reading the peom.
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