joe1949
 
Reply Tue 3 Feb, 2004 05:13 pm
She's my women
I hear him say
What does he mean? by the way?

Does he own her
It seems to me
Got his lines crossed.

Got me at a loss
She's a person
Not a clothes tag.

Say it to her
Like a bull to a rag
Womens a person.

Don't treat her that way
You'll wake up
She's gone away.

I love my lady
I tell her each day
She has her point.

Its better that way
So when I hear "She's my Women"
Think little respect.

He say's it through neglect
So don't say it no more
You maybe luck.

She's back through your door
Womens not a label
She's your wife across the table.

Mate its a fact
Get yourself together
And clean up your act.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 3 Feb, 2004 05:42 pm
Hey Joe, nice work. I hate it when my bf calls me woman, I find it very demeaning and disrespectful. Actually I told him this the other day and he hasn't said it since....yet. My bro in law also calls my sister (his wife) woman too, but it seems she likes it. I think it's just some sick new term young people think is cool.
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joe1949
 
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Reply Tue 3 Feb, 2004 05:47 pm
I agree with you on that one. I think the word women sounds like she's my slave. The young nowadays seem to think its a cool word, but its downgrading. Thanks for reading my poem.
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El-Diablo
 
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Reply Tue 3 Feb, 2004 07:43 pm
I like the poem and the message. Keep up the good work.
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joe1949
 
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Reply Wed 4 Feb, 2004 02:08 pm
thanks so much EL-DIABLO
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cusick
 
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Reply Wed 4 Feb, 2004 03:10 pm
A woman should stand up and be counted and you put it so eloquently. Maggie
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