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The past meets the future!

 
 
Reply Fri 30 Jan, 2004 04:19 pm
It's over, you win.
I hate to say it, this is a sin.
You lied, you won.
This is a joke, I am done.
I faught hard, I did what I could do.
It's over now, you'll still get whats comin to you
The fun begins, the past was a lie
Your future is true
I am in charge of whats happenis to you
So walk with caution, run with fear.
Don't lose breath, cause I see you in my rear veiw mirror
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Reply Fri 30 Jan, 2004 04:30 pm
Great liked it The end was the best wasn't expecting that one. good ending Ilike the style and the discriptive way you wrot it. Well Done.

The past does catch up with you in the end
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Reply Fri 30 Jan, 2004 04:33 pm
Thanks Joe!
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