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Are my lyrics any good so far?

 
 
Reply Wed 4 Jan, 2012 08:12 pm
1st Verse only so far
Yall think you made it out the gate faster than me
Thinkin your the master blaster ohh but cant ya see
I caught yall like pokemon pikachu
Now thank you for all what you did and do
Cause i couldnt have made it this far without you
God bless you now get on your knees and pray to
the man who took his life to save you
The king of the jews
Hes higher than you
hes treble while your bass yah its true
Hes louder and prouder
he be over 10 thousand of vegetas scouter
Now get on your knees and pray
cause yall dont know the day
that he will return to judge and show the way..
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Reply Sun 8 Jan, 2012 09:09 am
@cvmerchanary,
very nice,,,the lord references was on point
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