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Unrequested Death

 
 
Reply Thu 29 Jan, 2004 10:19 pm
Fire consumes the world
I am alone.
I cannot comprehend
why they would do this?
They say that it is to defend,
but how is that?
I didn't hurt them,
I do not know them,
I have never been there.
An explosion shakes the windows
and they shatter.
Time slows
and I know that these seconds are my last,
agonizing seconds that last lifetimes.
They say that "your life flashes behind your eyes."
This is a lie,
that I know.
White ripples across the horizon
the end is near,
how cliche.
Death approaches,
a heavenly white.
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Rae
 
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Reply Wed 11 Feb, 2004 08:01 pm
Excellent!
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benevolenthell
 
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Reply Mon 23 Feb, 2004 10:26 pm
Hey, thanks.
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