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Thu 29 Jan, 2004 04:46 pm
I hated you cause you could hurt me
I hated myself for letting that rule my life
I hated that I couldn't leave the house
this strong defense system I no longer rely
I've learned not to be so vile
I've let my gaurd down
I let you in
I let myself love
I let you in.
You've always been weird
they always said
Well if you knew me and took your time
You would know I was just scared
So quick to judge, but so am I
I have lost my rage
I forgive you
I'm no longer mad
I forgive you.
I looked deep inside myself
I was unhappy
I needed a change
I finally found myself
No thanks to you, but thats ok
I can show emotion
I am free
I see through you
I am free.
plenty of emotion in this poem, Iliked it. For me it potrays life in many ways. To be free is a wonderful feeling.
stand up for pessimism,
I like this poem, will probably copy and keep it, if you do not mind.
Of course, I do not mean "publish" it. Just keep it to read. It says a lot of things I feel like saying often. and I find many places for pessimism, unfortunately.
(just correcting the word "vial"- which means a container [noun],
changing it to 'vile' which is what you meant- ugly evil [adjective].
Thank you very much. Theo, please use my poem, and thank-you for correcting me. I've meant to change it myself but just havn't got around to it. I'm gald you liked it.
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