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Thu 29 Jan, 2004 04:28 pm
I rest my weary head
On a pillow of despair.
I should have lied, denied.
He knew.
Wrapped close
Dragged to the stars
In wild delight
A crescendo of passion
Soon spent.
Then shame.
Just once was no excuse.
Trust was gone
Into the annals of
What might have been.
I cry myself to sleep,
a million tears
Won't bring him back.
rymed well liked it but was a bit confused,which doesn't take much for me. On reading it I thought at first it was about someone that had an affair, then near the end thought that maybe someone had died. I read it again then I realised it was someone that had a one night stand and it cost them there relationship. Would I be right? sorry think my brain went to sleep.
Hellen thanks for replying. Yes you are right. Maggie
This is intensely related, maggie.
Your timing, your use of words, everything... the whole story makes me want to weep for the person suffering the loss.
Writing AT IT'S BEST!!
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Thank you for replying and your lovely comments. Jackie. Maggie
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