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Two Blue Eyes

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darkshade
 
Reply Tue 27 Jan, 2004 03:45 pm
Two Blue Eyes

Beautiful purity in two blue eyes
A burning passion that ignores demise
A tainted hand full of lies
Touching one of our forbidden Angels
One of the Angels from our own skies
but she is strong with strength that never dies
Unsure, scared, embarassed and numb
Yet look how beautiful she has become
Yes I can see it
It is there emanating
That beautiful purity
Raging behind those two blue eyes
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tell me why
 
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Reply Tue 20 Apr, 2004 10:22 pm
Sweet Smile
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the dark lord
 
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Reply Thu 22 Apr, 2004 08:50 pm
that is a very good poem i comend you on your success
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