@jackielai,
(i). All writers who understand human nature are clever.
*** shaespear was clever. ** - If you put this here, the next sentance belongs in a new paragraph. This sentence paragraph is about clever people. The next sentence is about poets.
(ii). No one is a true poet unless he can stir the hearts of men.
(by allowing (I) and (ii) to be together, the next sentence determines of they all fit. You put two apples with an orange. if (iv) comes second.
(i). All writers who understand human nature are clever.
(ii). No one is a true poet unless he can stir the hearts of men.
(iii). Shakespeare wrote Hamlet.
***Shakepsear was clever***
(iv). No write who does not understand human nature can stir the hearts of men.
(v). None but a true poet could have written Hamlet.
You have begun to list things. SO where is the colon? the semi- colon? the brackets. improper grammar proves it is wrong.
(i). All writers who understand human nature are clever.
(ii). No one is a true poet unless he can stir the hearts of men.
(iii). Shakespeare wrote Hamlet.
(iv). No write who does not understand human nature can stir the hearts of men.
** shakespear was clever*** new paragraph.
(v). None but a true poet could have written Hamlet.
My initial problem was that I figured, we can convert the paragraph into dialog. which makes it able to be written in ANY order. if we can use multiple paragraphs.
it is a redundant statement, and makes it seem like you are talking to an idiot if (iv) is not last.