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Left Wanting

 
 
Reply Sun 25 Jan, 2004 05:47 pm
The past meanders between us
we let it flow by... slow
waters deep with regret
choppy with angst
connected shorelines through conversation
not enough to satisfy me ever,
the future escapes analysis
left in the grey once again
we trun and go our seperate ways.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sun 25 Jan, 2004 06:04 pm
Hi, tagged. I like the imagery you've used.
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tagged lyricist
 
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Reply Mon 26 Jan, 2004 06:25 am
thanks edgarblythe. I appreciate people who take the time to give feed back.
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theollady
 
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Reply Mon 26 Jan, 2004 11:42 am
I can identify with your message T_L
It is universal in it's meditation to "what might have been".
Hope you keep putting your thoughts to publishing.
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tagged lyricist
 
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Reply Mon 26 Jan, 2004 01:24 pm
thank you very much theollady Smile and i will.
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