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'Letter To My Brother In San Francisco'

 
 
jjorge
 
Reply Sat 7 Dec, 2002 05:28 am
'Letter To My Brother In San Francisco'


Dear David,
The rumor's true.

Winter has wrapped our sick and tired
world in the customary bandages.

Soon enough they'll be discolored - fouled
by the residue of our strivings.

But for today all is wrapped in a healing whiteness.
It's just as you remember:

The stillness of yard and street,
the trees transformed, the quiet!
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dupre
 
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Reply Sun 8 Dec, 2002 04:31 am
Wow! Brother in San Francisco will be jealous and long for home. Wonderful imagery of snow as a bandage and our activities "fouling" the pristine snow.
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Kara
 
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Reply Sun 8 Dec, 2002 05:23 pm
jjorge, that is beautiful! Happy the brother with a poetic sibling.

If he is in San Francisco, then snow is only a wished-for treat, unless he heads for the Sierra. Of course, the City has other compensations.
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jjorge
 
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Reply Sun 8 Dec, 2002 09:13 pm
Thanks dupre, thanks Kara
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msolga
 
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Reply Sun 8 Dec, 2002 09:32 pm
A pleasure to read your poem, jjorge.
A lovely gentle & melancholy feel to it.
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jjorge
 
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Reply Sun 8 Dec, 2002 09:52 pm
thanks msolga
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