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Better off Gone

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InTraNsiTiOn
 
Reply Tue 20 Jan, 2004 09:28 pm
ambition is lost
sleep away the time
it takes to be taken
slowely open your eyes
to let the light in
but not too fast now
only for a moment
your breaking, breaking
breaking away
from your mind
from your soul
your heart feels no more
you feel your burdening yourself
you can't take this
you won't
so go back to sleep
go back and forget
that you lost something
better off gone
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joe1949
 
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Reply Wed 21 Jan, 2004 05:33 pm
WHAT A SAD AND MOVING POEM. WELL WRITTEN.
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