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THANK HEAVENS

 
 
joe1949
 
Reply Mon 19 Jan, 2004 12:02 pm
Surprised I looked at you and seen the strain.
The closer I felt the pain.
I knew that day. A friend you needed.

People would talk, I did not care.
You needed someone, I was there.
When you became ill, I prayed each day.

That god would take care of you.
In his special way.
He answered my prayer, I'm glad to say.

Your getting better each day.
Your someone special in my life.
And one day soon I will make you my wife.

I'm so happy, when I look at you.
The sunshine rays come shining through.
I will always be thankfull to god above.

For keeping safe the one I love.
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JustBrooke
 
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Reply Mon 19 Jan, 2004 12:12 pm
Hi Joe Smile

I read it twice. Each time it made me smile. It's very compassionate and loving.

I love it! Very Happy

~Brooke
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joe1949
 
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Reply Mon 19 Jan, 2004 01:45 pm
brooke
thank you for reading my poem. I have just started writing poetry, I have always wanted to write things like this, but was never very sure if I would be any good.
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