Okay... I got a couple questions that may be helpful to me to understand.
I think you may be a London mistific emsee. You have that pronunciation that helps so mildly for you. You have that talent that no too many have. As you know there are tons of styles of rap. You have that edgy style that makes it so gracious for your part in the rap game. You have great sequences in these lyrics becasue of the transitions that can be worked in to it. Overall great pronuncation that can be used. I like this style, don't see it too much. May be hard to work on anything else, I encourage you to stay on this style, very rare.
Kind of like the rapper overseas "Devlin"