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Shooting Star

 
 
Reply Fri 16 Jan, 2004 12:20 am
In a peaceful night I saw
a phenomenon of light
a big shouting star fall
in front of my eyes delight

What a nice stellar brilliant light
amazing my life as in awe I did stand
after the sighting change my life
because that night, I left my birth land

When I look at the sky stars
searching for the falling light
hoping to see me back at my land
looking for the sign of a shooting star
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Reply Tue 20 Jan, 2004 01:00 pm
enjoyed the poen nice style to it.
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