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Thu 15 Jan, 2004 07:35 pm
my rage is building up
i could say so much, but i won't
i have too much invested in you
but yet nothing at all
you are competly here
i am half way out the door
my heart is with you
but it trys to want to wander
how do i make it stop
you mean more to me
then i want to beleive
i am scared, but still here for the long haul
i love you, but are we strong enough
to hold the ups and curve the downs
we are, yes
and i am sorry for the mixed emotions
i am true, true to you
I like this. The line "to hold the ups and curve the downs" is very well crafted IMO.
Thank you Kirsten, glad you liked it.