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VOICES OF THE HEART

 
 
Reply Thu 15 Jan, 2004 05:03 pm
Smile When we travel to different places.
We see the people, but only there faces.
But not the hurt that leaves inner traces

But when they speak you feel the hurt.
That someone has treated them like dirt.
So when i see them not like a page from a book.

They see the anger in my look.
So in the heart there is a place that.
Makes me happy to see your face.

So like the ice and windy rain.
That that gives you anger and so much pain.
Someone there to help you with the strain.

So like many people I have met in the past.

I will not leave you at a lost
I am your friend forever more.
I will not leave you cold at the door.
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joe1949
 
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Reply Sun 18 Jan, 2004 07:19 pm
interesting item. it is true we do not notice people as we walk by and you surmiss that others do not have a care in the world. it did ryme in some place, then you went of the trail. Nice attempt
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Reply Mon 19 Jan, 2004 08:38 am
thanks just trying out something different, not quite got it yet maybe I will stick to my original way of writing.but thanks for the comments
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