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Falling asleep

 
 
floris
 
Reply Tue 6 Jan, 2004 10:10 am
I fell asleep in your dreams.
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cusick
 
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Reply Wed 7 Jan, 2004 04:38 am
A beautiful poem with such a sad ending. Maggie
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floris
 
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Reply Wed 7 Jan, 2004 07:06 am
Re: Falling asleep
In spite of its sad ending, "Falling asleep", is one of my favourite poems. It's for the one who painted my world in green and pink. These colors have a strong signification for me.
Happiness without tears doesn't exist. It's my opinion.
I feel wonderful when I can express my feelings in lyrics... my lyrics are simple, but are from my heart.
You know, in my language "magie" means "wizardry".
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cusick
 
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Reply Fri 9 Jan, 2004 03:14 pm
It's great that you find solace in your poetry as I do but my name is Maggie and wizardry has no part in my life. Maggie
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floris
 
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Reply Sat 10 Jan, 2004 05:55 am
Re: Falling asleep
If my sentence --> "You know, in my language "magie" means "wizardry" " made you feel bad, then accept my apologies. My intention was only to tell you a word from my language using some letters from your name. An innocent game (one of my names in Portugal means flower). Maybe I was a child doing that, but now you know what was in my mind when I wrote those words.
With respect, Floris for Maggie.
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cusick
 
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Reply Sat 10 Jan, 2004 11:13 am
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Floris love you did not offend me. You know what Voltiare said. ( I might not agree with what you say but I would fight to the death your right to say it.) We were in the Algarve this autumn b ut I prefer Lisbon Maggie
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floris
 
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Reply Mon 12 Jan, 2004 02:00 am
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Very well said, Maggie.
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