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Guess the action from the poem!

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Reply Mon 5 Jan, 2004 04:32 pm
Darkness so sweet so lovely,
touching so soft and tender,
skin so warm so soft,
don't stop don't stop?

Breathing so fast so quickly,
kissing so gentle and mild,
areas so new so hot,
don't stop don't stop?

Screaming so loud so raspy,
liquids so all over,
bodys so linked together,
aw crap you're a guy.
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Centroles
 
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Reply Tue 6 Jan, 2004 01:15 am
i've eliminated the obvious, what is it?
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Reply Tue 6 Jan, 2004 07:40 am
You eliminated the whole text?
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