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Poem about philosophy, like?

 
 
Reply Sun 13 Feb, 2011 03:32 am
The philosophers words bleeding down the page
Seeping into your skin
The blood mixes with your own
The message flows into your heart
Pumps quickly to your brain.
Then you think again.
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oristarA
 
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Reply Sun 13 Feb, 2011 05:25 am
@Ali phil,
Ali phil wrote:

The philosophers words bleeding down the page
Seeping into your skin
The blood mixes with your own
The message flows into your heart
Pumps quickly to your brain.
Then you think again.



I was cracked up at the first sight of the poem. Very Happy

But what has happened to the able2know? The buttom "Post a New Thread" has vanished.


Ali phil
 
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Reply Sun 13 Feb, 2011 05:30 am
@oristarA,
Haha thanks (:
I don't know sorry i only started using this site agian very recently.
oristarA
 
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Reply Sun 13 Feb, 2011 05:37 am
@Ali phil,
Ali phil wrote:

Haha thanks (:
I don't know sorry i only started using this site agian very recently.


So you couldn't find the button to start a new topic either?
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oristarA
 
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Reply Sun 13 Feb, 2011 05:42 am
@Ali phil,
Ali phil wrote:

Haha thanks (:
I don't know sorry i only started using this site agian very recently.


Plus, I wonder if I've misused the phrase "crack up". What I intended to express is "I smiled in appreciation at the first sight of the poem". I mean, "it is a good poem in meaning, but its rhyme perhaps needs to be improved."

Have I used the phrase properly?

Ali phil
 
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Reply Sun 13 Feb, 2011 05:49 am
@oristarA,
Haha I dont know much about poetry To be honest, nah i can't see a 'new thread' If you click Forums it does what i think you're looking for Wink
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