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The White Flower

 
 
Reply Wed 17 Dec, 2003 11:08 pm
A meadow of purple flowers
The wind blows
I sit and gaze for hours
To see what shows

Purple peddles float by
Like an ocean they rise and fall
One flower caught my eye
It is strong, solitary and stands tall

The purple flowers lean on one another
The white flower leans on none
It has the grace and elegance of a mother
An example of how God's work is done

The sun stands tall in the sky
Like the flower it shines bright and brilliant
Without the flower the sun would die
Yet the sun keeps the flower resiliant
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Shajahan
 
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Reply Wed 17 Dec, 2003 11:43 pm
Re: The White Flower
darkshade wrote:


Without the flower the sun would die
Yet the sun keeps the flower resiliant



Oh, my God! The sun would die without the flowers!!!

Fantastic darkshade! Your poem shines like a bright shade!
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Reply Thu 18 Dec, 2003 12:59 pm
Thankyou Shajahan I always love your comments.
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