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Wed 17 Dec, 2003 01:12 am
Please understand me, you don't understand me
I'm not who you think i used to be
I feel like i'm in chains, locked and held by you
You make me do alot of things that i don't want to do
Make me, the things i do for you
Hate me, like the way i feel for you
Throw me up against the wall
Stab me in the heart you all
I'll show you what you earned
When I rip you apart
I wanna go home, but you're there in the dark
I wanna go home, but you'll rip me apart
Please understand me, you don't understand me
I'm not who you think I used to be
This is very passionate and that is great. What is the motive behind this poem? When someone worries about being original they will never acheive originality; I think that concept is true with understanding as well.
Yes I suppose that is a way of putting it. Thanks for commenting.
You changed me - what a nice accusations.
Now the question is wether he / she had changed their mind?
Wish you all the best........
Kerver,
I liked what you wrote and I hope that you didn't take my comment as negative.
No darkshade,
I like what you wrote, it made me think a bit deeper. Thanks.
I think it's as good as any Nine Inch Nails song, in terms of it's expression and raw emotion, and I love Trent Reznor, so don't take that comment the wrong way. The title reminded me of that old hit from the 80s by The Spoons.
People change life changes great write
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