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verge of escape

 
 
kerver
 
Reply Thu 11 Dec, 2003 11:42 pm
leave the light off, i'm not comin home
i left my phone there, so leave me alone
everything is the same, it's a dull dull life
i don't ever wanna be your wife
confusion, delusion, whatever the case
it's not too late to leave this place
i wanna be gone so far from here
but i'm stuck with this endless thought of fear
as my mind goes wild, i chase it around
looking for answers that will never be found.
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K VEE SHANKER
 
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Reply Sat 13 Dec, 2003 05:58 am
Re: verge of escape
kerver wrote:
leave the light off, i'm not comin home
i left my phone there, so leave me alone
everything is the same, it's a dull dull life
i don't ever wanna be your wife
confusion, delusion, whatever the case
it's not too late to leave this place
i wanna be gone so far from here
but i'm stuck with this endless thought of fear
as my mind goes wild, i chase it around
looking for answers that will never be found.


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Dear Kerver you've made me sad by putting it across so precisely.
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kerver
 
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Reply Mon 15 Dec, 2003 11:30 am
Curious as to how I affected you....cheer up
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K VEE SHANKER
 
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Reply Tue 16 Dec, 2003 10:07 am
Dear Kerver,
Your poem brought back the very same feelings about situations from where I wanted to leave but was afraid of moving out.Even after moving out I felt hopeless.It's like what I've read "You know you're losing and want to end the game.But, you realise you can't quit!"
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Wed 31 Dec, 2003 04:45 pm
Sometimes a relationship feels more like a disease or a drug you can't get off. I know i've been there.
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K VEE SHANKER
 
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Reply Thu 1 Jan, 2004 12:50 am
Welcome fellow sufferer.
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cusick
 
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Reply Mon 5 Jan, 2004 12:41 pm
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A very poignant verse. Just try to keep a little hope going./ Hugs Maggie
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