Reply Tue 31 Aug, 2010 07:56 am
I'm not going to make it
An alien in a hostile place
The air is unfit
The sun is unkind
Climbing a summit
On an inverted world
It’s time to stop
Examining a life
Not worth living
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mister kitten
 
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Reply Tue 31 Aug, 2010 10:49 am
I thought the 4th line read
"The sun is mankind"
I liked that, but unkind works too
chad3006
 
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Reply Tue 31 Aug, 2010 11:17 am
@mister kitten,
Thanks MK
mister kitten
 
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Reply Tue 31 Aug, 2010 05:51 pm
@chad3006,
Noooooooooooo, thank you for sharing it
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