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Beautiful Kiss

 
 
Reply Thu 4 Dec, 2003 09:22 pm
I see you dark haired girl
I see you touching your hair
Your nose is imperfect, but not your stare
You laugh with bright teeth
Bright like your soul
Your teeth framed by your lips
What would it be like to share a kiss?
Beautiful, wonderful, blissful?
Horrible, terrible, lamentable?
Not the latter rather the former
But you pass by without a glance
Never again will I have my chance
Goodbye dark haired girl
Goodbye beautiful kiss
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Rae
 
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Reply Thu 4 Dec, 2003 10:21 pm
Very nice, darkshade.
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Individual
 
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Reply Thu 4 Dec, 2003 11:57 pm
My pubescent life in a nutshell...
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Shajahan
 
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Reply Fri 5 Dec, 2003 01:03 am
Welcome to you.

Very nice to read your poem....
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bgryan
 
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Reply Sat 6 Dec, 2003 02:41 pm
beautiful kiss
I like this,short simple read made it into a good poem. Well done.
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