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You Gave Love To me..........

 
 
Reply Thu 4 Dec, 2003 11:28 am
You Gave Love To me..........


Waiting for you
On the lonely road
Interrupted by nothing
But for the raising loam
Of a bullock cart......

Waiting for you
On the lonely road
Interrupted by nothing
But for the love-lorn
Song of a cuckoo.....

Waiting for you
On the lonely road
Interrupted by nothing
But for the love
You may give or deny

Brooding for an eternity
Ends on the
Saddened moments.....

You stepped
In my way....
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Rae
 
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Reply Thu 4 Dec, 2003 10:22 pm
Shajahan ~ don't give up. Your poem is lovely.
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msolga
 
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Reply Thu 4 Dec, 2003 10:46 pm
I found your poem very moving, Shajahan.
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Shajahan
 
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Reply Fri 5 Dec, 2003 12:50 am
Thank you Rae and msolga.....

Sure, I would try to give some more.......
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