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God.........

Show me the God -
Two Friends entered
a heated argument.

God stands there -
In the boundary
of the Faith.

Faith is an effort.

Efforts come from
the soul's thinking -
There stands the God.

Thinking arises
in the tissue of
the brain

The tissues should vibrate
to make a thinking act
and He induces the
vibration

Vibration of tissue
is the law of the birth

He makes the law
of the birth

Show me the God -
The wargame went on
unending....

The nearby prayer hall
echoes the hymns -
'My religion is mine
And yours is yours......'

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Shajahan, welcome to A2K.

I like the style of your poem. So apt and true. I'm certain all here would agree that we would like to read more of your thoughts.

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Welcome and Thank You!

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Thanks Letty and Husker.......

Looking forward to more of your support in future too.....

Let me try to add more of my thoughts......

Before that let me get a bearing of this place.....

wish to see you again,

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Letty wrote:

Shajahan, welcome to A2K.

I like the style of your poem.

Style?

Thanks. This is the very first I have tried in English.........

I used to write in Tamil but not in English.....

The above was the one, I wrote and published in a e-magazine in my mother tongue some six months ago.

Today I joined this group and wished to start with some good and positive subject and hence I translated it from Tamil......

I had doubts whether it would come good....

You had said it was good and that brings hope......

(Tamil - a language in the southern most part of India)

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Sha, (excuse the abbreviation) There is another A2Ker who is from India, but now lives in the UK. His name is Gautam and he is a poet in his own right. I have been trying for some time to locate the words to Song of India written by Rimsky Korsakov. Perhaps you know them.

By your style, I meant the free flow of your words. I am amazed that your mother tongue is not English. Shocked

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Letty wrote:

Sha, (excuse the abbreviation)

No problem at all.

Letty wrote:

There is another A2Ker who is from India, but now lives in the UK. His name is Gautam and he is a poet in his own right.

He had already welcomed me. Thanks for the message.

Letty wrote:

I have been trying for some time to locate the words to Song of India written by Rimsky Korsakov. Perhaps you know them.

Honestly I do not know.

And , Thanks again....

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check this out:
http://website.lineone.net/~ferguscairns/rimmen.htm#Top

http://www.geocities.com/Vienna/3606/start.html

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Thank you Husker. I tried both the links. The first one said it was under construction and the other could not be opened...

However I will keep trying.......

Thank you again........

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Pure of heart,
He desires nothing,
Even in despair.

He is content
In the knowledge of the Self.

With whom
May I compare him?

With clear and steady insight
He knows that whatever he sees
It is by its very nature nothing.

How can he prefer
One thing to another?

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God.......

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