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To the guy on the bus

 
 
Lily
 
Reply Sat 10 Jul, 2010 07:25 am
Sorry for the many looks I gave you
It was only 'cause you're so cute
And looked like a prince, too
Anyway, I hope you didn't think I was a creep
'Cause I was looking rather sweet

Maybe I should've told you my name
Maybe you wanted to do the same

Sorry for wanting to meet you once more
don't think you'll know you've met me before
Anyway I was just wondering about when I got of the bus
You gave me a wave, I'm still wondering what that was



Hey guys, this is my first discussion started on this forum, so I blame every thing I've made wrongly on that fact
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BarbieQPickle
 
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Reply Thu 15 Jul, 2010 02:43 am
@Lily,
I really like it, keep writing. You should have gave your name you may never see this man again.
Lily
 
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Reply Tue 20 Jul, 2010 01:50 pm
@BarbieQPickle,
probably not..
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mic-holder
 
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Reply Fri 6 Aug, 2010 05:31 am
@Lily,
Beautiful piece put together....I like it
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