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THE LEFT EYE OF GOD

 
 
Reply Sat 30 Nov, 2002 04:59 pm
When the trees are bare
'Cause the leaves aren't there;
With the season's change
Snow's across the range;
I think of you on that western shore

I dream of blazing nights,
The California lights -
You out there with Jim.
I missed you both then;
Tonight, Love, I miss you even more.

I miss the dancing eyes
Before Montana skies;
Since you went with him
Give my best to Jim.
Who would think you'd even the score?

I see the shadows grow;
I hear the cattle low;
Yes I chose the range
Because the heart can change -
I remember you on that western shore.
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babsatamelia
 
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Reply Wed 4 Dec, 2002 11:49 pm
I DO believe you have a touch of the romantic
in you - how interesting. I enjoy reading you.
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chatoyant
 
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Reply Thu 5 Dec, 2002 12:15 am
edgar, I really like your poem. Thank you for sharing!
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Thu 5 Dec, 2002 05:40 am
Thank you both. I try to vary the subject matter from one piece to the next.
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