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Sun 30 Nov, 2003 03:22 pm
From the start I've had my doubts
Off and on, my mind twirls about
Are you real when your with me
Or are you fake, as fake can be
I wish my mind would set me free
Has reality not set in on thee
Good-bye my friend that I don't know
Because she changes when I go
I know you wish I would disappear
Soon I will, you have no fear
Good-bye my friend that I don't know
Good-bye these words that I bestow
Good-bye the one who had no time
Good-bye my friend fare well it's fine
You will not remember me
You'll wonder why you feel so free
Good-bye my friend that doesn't see
The reality of you and me
In your life you don't see
A space in your heart to share with me
All this time i've felt so used
I was desperate and for that abused
So drink another to forget
That i've been waiting since we met
My friend good-bye it's time to go
I leave you this for you to throw
So good-bye my friend i'll never know!
I like that one, and can relate to it.
goodbye my friend
This is good.I like how the poem was put together. Good work.
Poor kerver
It seems some know your situation and some do not, but we all feel your pain through your expressive words.
Yeah well I wrote this years ago and just recently ran into the person who inspired me to write this. Kinda a blast from the past. Thanks to those who enjoyed, and thanks for your honesty cav.
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