1
   

My Beloved Friend.

Forums: Original Writing
Email this Topic • Print this Page
 
 
bgryan
 
Reply Wed 26 Nov, 2003 05:34 pm
Come alive my love
and live your life.
Open your eyes
and take my hand
my beloved friend.
Come into the light
and dance upon the sea,
no tears will fall
beneath your feet.
Arise my love
my fair one
my beloved friend
  • Topic Stats
  • Top Replies
  • Link to this Topic
Type: Discussion • Score: 1 • Views: 565 • Replies: 5
No top replies

 
onyxelle
 
  1  
Reply Wed 26 Nov, 2003 06:04 pm
very very niiiiiiiice :-)
0 Replies
 
tcb
 
  1  
Reply Wed 26 Nov, 2003 07:05 pm
Well done bgryan
Cheers
t
0 Replies
 
edgarblythe
 
  1  
Reply Wed 26 Nov, 2003 10:40 pm
Yeah. Now, I like this, the message and the writing.
0 Replies
 
BlueMonkey
 
  1  
Reply Thu 27 Nov, 2003 01:20 am
Good poem. If only my ex friends could have come alive. If only.
0 Replies
 
cavfancier
 
  1  
Reply Thu 27 Nov, 2003 01:26 am
Veddy nice indeed bgryan. Keep posting.
0 Replies
 
 

Related Topics

What inspired you to write...discuss - Discussion by lostnsearching
"Patriotism Is The Virtue Of The Viscious..." - Question by mark noble
It floated there..... - Discussion by Letty
creative writer feeling less inclined to post - Discussion by Endymion
Small Voices - Discussion by Endymion
Rockets Red Glare - Discussion by edgarblythe
Short Story: Wilkerson's Tank - Discussion by edgarblythe
The Virtual Storytellers Campfire - Discussion by cavfancier
1st Annual Able2Know Halloween Story Contest - Discussion by realjohnboy
Literary Agents (a resource for writers) - Discussion by Craven de Kere
What is the best material to use in an enclosure for a large animal? - Question by ArrowRaptor
 
  1. Forums
  2. » My Beloved Friend.
Copyright © 2024 MadLab, LLC :: Terms of Service :: Privacy Policy :: Page generated in 0.04 seconds on 05/05/2024 at 10:04:29
▲ ▼