3 poems

Let me know (or dont), one is old, one revised, one i think is disposable guess which fits.

'Punishment + Prize
Periwinkle disguised
Whole lot of trouble
Putting off both for single surprise
Denizen is the name
For inadequate dies
All degree of the infliction
Gone from the touch
Inward bound restriction
Scratiching with as is told
Laughter scared benediction
Think the path flows
Always today's
Never tomorrows
Folly in the reaction of sorrows
Misery prescripted
Denizen is back towards
Pushing hopeful descripted
Nothing any longer reigns (or reins it seems) restriction
Beautiful French maid
The name of who is Rough
Without out reason for stamina
Held without drowning in the Bluff
With courage enough is enough
Lifted only to float
Within wildernesses heart
No need to fight
Or button the coat
Neck high in water
Swimming dry'


Next'
This one has no title and was if i remember about a program about Diwali or Makar Sankranti, i have never been to India. Maybe thats what this is called.

'Never been to India'.


Hash fundamental to the Saddhu?
Frightening
You must make every effort to
understand your 'self'
Don't do what the Guru does
do as he says
Eunuchs chanting until paid off
Comparison to Christ in the gift (or given)
Of money given (or gift) and then given back (or gifted I suppose)
More chillums smoking
The presenter looks bewildered and afraid.
Danger zone
Trident appears
Beautiful India



Crap prgrame Great backdrop.




ENCOURAGEMENT, (this still being the stages of looking, I find I pre-emptively strike my self)
Cross legs (peculiar design of looking and of waiting)
Spinal column (to climb is to wobble)
How long to sit (?) (no mention of why we are postured)
Freak out (black out)
Cop out (drop out)
Cry out let the tears run (we shall walk)
Brief moments (regardless)
Bird call, breezy treezy (if nothing but if aint easy)
Notification of out pain (intoward would be ablution)
Go in the moments (but of not movements?)
Take time off (not takes time off of)
Breath of the leaves (back or still with the breeze)
Rivers run (I tend to hide)
Expand experiment enchant (decant)
Get it into the moment
Present moment (as if any thing else self matters)
3rd days end (anticipation a resurrection)
Of a beginning (fed up of the ending that charges a prejudice)
Sound the present moment ('sing without a reason')
Waters orchestral (not orchestra it would need be seemed)
Flow of design (in the builders of dams)
No flaw for action (proved that wrong)(but in another vein would read again)
Nothing compares but (too you)
the crys and calls of the world (cries)
I am in (or of, both not inclusive)
boundaries of the sound of the eye (wonder at what point there was no more sky)
From more sides (slides) from all sides
As me,
Aware the call (but not hearing it)(maybe only in the listening)
This is meditation
How can I lose? (well I think I just showed you how)
Never lose it (I try)
Simple recollection (but not to re collect?)
In all forms (yes even in mine, just hiding)
Realise the present moment (before it ends, but that was supposed to be begins)
Never before never again (self same said)
Miss it miss it (missed it)
Effort of the experience (which is great because it takes none but what come afterwards, that would be reflection, some say one without the other does not exist alone)
And moment that is only
Mine (leave that one well alone)(well not)
Meet your meditation (not necessarily yourself)
With courageous might (I guess it does mean yourself after all)
Steadfast
Unbinding the bonds of sorrow
ETERANL EXPERIENCING SELF

This one gets a big shrug but someone might like it.
You can with this either read it without the brackets or just the brackets or both.
Up to you.
Hope you enjoyed them.
Looking for real critisism if you know what you are talking about and unreal critisim if you dont:)