Reply Thu 24 Dec, 2009 06:36 pm
Why dont you do nice things for me?
When i do nice things for you?
Was that me you ever desired?
Or as usual are you just tired?
Have you given up entirely?
Or even uninvested nightly?
Why dont you call me evermore anymore?
Dont you care am i just a bore chore?

If my love is to be contingent on your

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Reply Thu 24 Dec, 2009 09:11 pm
@sometime sun,
hi sometime-
i like the way you use words-very unique.
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