Reply Mon 17 May, 2010 02:27 pm
Colossally clad about ore
Slaves gay in mid-day
Pharaoh entrances
Where cells reside-
all abysmal, old chambers
Destinies(, dynasties)
Beware of ambush,
conspiracy, deception
Praise our sun, but shun all
these, standing on knees
Sand between teeth
Gritting now
"Revolution"
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Reply Mon 17 May, 2010 03:31 pm
@mister kitten,
Enjoyable little poem. Was the revolution a biblical one or a general reference to slavery?
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Reply Mon 17 May, 2010 03:45 pm
@mister kitten,
Not really, I only wanted to be in Egypt for a moment.
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