Reply Sat 15 May, 2010 07:03 pm
I've been playing for fifty years
You know
my instrument-all worn out
Life is
the same when I repeat each day
More than
content, I am good,
A job,
Fingers bleed on piano keys

Fingers bleed on daily routines
- You know life is more than a job
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sometime sun
 
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Reply Fri 21 May, 2010 04:27 pm
@mister kitten,
Life is even better than a musical scene.
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salima
 
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Reply Fri 21 May, 2010 07:56 pm
@mister kitten,
mister kitten, you are a very ooold soul!
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Leonard
 
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Reply Fri 21 May, 2010 08:15 pm
@mister kitten,
Awesome poem. I wish I could play the piano.
mister kitten
 
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Reply Fri 21 May, 2010 08:29 pm
@Leonard,
sometime sun;167064 wrote:
Life is even better than a musical scene.

Life>death.
salima;167144 wrote:
mister kitten, you are a very ooold soul!

You make me smile, salima.
Leonard;167147 wrote:
Awesome poem. I wish I could play the piano.

Me too. But not as a job. There's contrast in the poem between a piano player playing piano every day and a person going to job every day. Maybe this would fit more appropriately in the Existentialist poems thread.
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VideCorSpoon
 
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Reply Sat 22 May, 2010 11:12 am
@mister kitten,
Great poem! Also, as a piano enthusiast, you may really appreciate this clip from the the 2009 Van Cliburn International Piano Competition of Nobuyuki Tsujii playing "The Little Bell." Excellent performance and good news is he won first place. Oh, and doubling the awesomeness of the performance is the fact that he is blind. One of my favorite piano tunes. Enjoy!

Blind kid playing piano - Snotr
Transcend
 
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Reply Mon 24 May, 2010 10:41 am
@VideCorSpoon,
mister kitten;164782 wrote:
I've been playing for fifty years
You know
my instrument-all worn out
Life is
the same when I repeat each day
More than
content, I am good,
A job,
Fingers bleed on piano keys

Fingers bleed on daily routines
- You know life is more than a job


I like it. It rings true with me. Smile
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