Reply Mon 10 May, 2010 01:26 pm
Listening to silence
Forgotten trees staring
Blaring music now
as we drive out of town
Our screams reach the skies
and the trees close their eyes-
As quick as bear traps go;
We lay bear traps around

After two clocks passed,
we returned to the grass
And in the snapped traps
found a once nimble cat
He's lying, ever crying
and almost dying
Yet we still carry our traps
Until our trees can elapse...
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sometime sun
 
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Reply Fri 21 May, 2010 02:34 pm
@mister kitten,
Leaves will not fall, blossoms ever last.

It confused me the first time I read it, but the more I do the cleaner it becomes.
Thank you
davidm
 
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Reply Thu 27 May, 2010 04:07 pm
@sometime sun,
Nice poem, Mr. Kitten.
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