Did you know that I miss you? (poem)

Lily my sweetness he may never know his loss
Do we remember those we once departed ?
In my aged body I can recall my errors and my loses.

Do you know that I miss you???
I hate you but my heart won't let me hit you
My aim is filled with fire and gall
I fire and hit the wall
My shell is death with vengeance within
I fire and hit the wind
Do you know that love you
fine frame and beautiful lips and shining smile
that to hear you and see you makes me weak
do you know it is your love I seek
so long denied my foolish pride
that no one can hurt me by your side
that your power I cannot deny
why do you make me cry???
You know it's a sin
You're a war I cannot win
Do you know that I love you
and that your loss is the loss of all
can you take my call
and be my all and everything
and bring me every joy
and be my toy???
Do you know I miss you
because I cannot hate you
because I need you
and I know it's a sin
and I'll never win with you...


Sorry... I liked the title, and robbed it...

Do you know I miss you too,
And when your sad it makes me blue,
Lily your friend does not know what they're missing,
If I was them I would be kissing,
you, don't be blue,
Baby hold your head up high
And please don't cry,
Caroline

All we need is chorus and we have hit record..

'Did you know that I miss you?'
He said to her with a grin
'Did you know that I miss you,
I'll say it again:
Did you know that i miss you?'
Scoffing, she replied
'Yes, you fool, and I know why.'
To this he addressed,
'Well then fair lady go put on your dress!'
With a sigh and a sneer,
'I've burnt them all' she said without cheer.
'But you are mistaken
because I've set those fires, ablazin''
and here she gasped,
as the fires drove through her canvas' grasp.

<ole
5-10-10
Forum poems are the best :painting: Look what you've started Lily!

Roses are red
Violets are blue.
That's it.

Thats it, we have the chorus. Now what tune shall we have ?

YouTube - Miley Cyrus - I Miss You (FULL)
Oh dear, I do believe we've found a tune.

you guys are way too sweet. Just to clearify, it's just partly true. I started to write it 'cause I saw that my best friend got tagged in one her new friends album, and lots of people had commented it. I know she's got new friends and so do I, but I'm just afraid we won't be best friends anymore, I guess..
Concerning the music, I don't have a clue

Roses are red
Violets are blue
put them on Prozak
and they'll shrink too
The pansys are thinking
of what not to do
and the roses grow thorney
to pick on you...

I hate rhymes... Rhymes lie

Did you know that I sometimes
look at old pictures of you and me
And with sorrow I remember what used to be?
Sometimes I look at new ones of you
From facebook-albums made by your new friends
I might be a bit silly too
But I thought our friendship would never end

Did you know that I envy you and those guys?
And I wish that I'd never told those lies
You laugh and look so happy
But I've dappled my sky
All because of that simple lie
Or, I don't really envy you
I mostly just feel blue

I mean you have your gang,
you have your crew
But I'm all by myself
and don't know what to do

You have so many friends, and I so few
especially now when I've lost you too


Did you know that I miss you?


tried to improve it a bit...

From your missing friend, Bluely-True.