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I hate it when (poem)

 
 
Lily
 
Reply Sun 21 Mar, 2010 02:31 pm
I hate it when I don't get the joke,
I hate the hairy part of an artichoke,
I hate it when I have to smile,
I hate it when I cry,
I hate when I get the joke after a while
I hate it when I'm not good enough,
I hate it when I'm too smart,
I hate fat people on a crowded bus,
I hate the sound of baby cry,
I hate stepping in dog poo on the street,
And I hate to say good bye,
I hate brown bananas,
I hate it when I fail,
I hate it when I spill yogurt on my pyjamas,
I hate to get chain mails
I hate the mean girl in my class,
I hate tests I don't pass,
I hate the sun for shining when I'm mad,
I hate feeling down when I don't have any reasons for being sad,
I hate it even more when you give me perfectly good reasons
Because I hate you for being so easy to love but so hard to get
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xris
 
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Reply Sun 21 Mar, 2010 03:31 pm
@Lily,
You dont really..
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mister kitten
 
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Reply Sun 21 Mar, 2010 04:28 pm
@Lily,
"Retaliate when hate is in the air!"
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William
 
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Reply Sun 21 Mar, 2010 05:08 pm
@Lily,
Lily;141968 wrote:
I hate it when I don't get the joke,
I hate the hairy part of an artichoke,
I hate it when I have to smile,
I hate it when I cry,
I hate when I get the joke after a while
I hate it when I'm not good enough,
I hate it when I'm too smart,
I hate fat people on a crowded bus,
I hate the sound of baby cry,
I hate stepping in dog poo on the street,
And I hate to say good bye,
I hate brown bananas,
I hate it when I fail,
I hate it when I spill yogurt on my pyjamas,
I hate to get chain mails
I hate the mean girl in my class,
I hate tests I don't pass,
I hate the sun for shining when I'm mad,
I hate feeling down when I don't have any reasons for being sad,
I hate it even more when you give me perfectly good reasons
Because I hate you for being so easy to love but so hard to get


Feel better now? What about speckled bananas? Ha, and that's what you get for wearing pajamas. That's like taking a shower with your shoes on, Ha! Just trying to dwindle down your list is all. Hope you laughed. It's difficult to hate with your mouth open. No scowl or sneer can exist. Laughing

William
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HexHammer
 
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Reply Mon 22 Mar, 2010 10:13 pm
@Lily,
@ Lily
In a negative spin ..you'll never win!
only sorrow surrounds ones mind ..and happyness is hard to find

..allow youself to love and live
..allow the soul to freely give

Choose life, choose youself, choose strenght!

YouTube - great music !!!! unique voice - awesome !!!
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