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The girl that's always forgotten

 
 
Lily
 
Reply Wed 5 Aug, 2009 07:40 am
Betrayal is a stabb in the heart
Hurts when it's made by a friend
You are invisible when you want to be seen
But your pain is displayed on the big screen
Being forgotten is a knife stabb in the back
And sometimes gray is even worse than black
Being numb can be so much worse than any pain
Hurts when I love you but you don't feel the same

http://www.philosophyforum.com/forum/members/lily/albums/pictures/1173-invisable-girl.jpg
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xris
 
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Reply Wed 5 Aug, 2009 08:21 am
@Lily,
When there is no pain in love,then its not love.
Catchabula
 
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Reply Wed 5 Aug, 2009 12:21 pm
@Lily,
Lily, I have a direct question. Who made the illustration with this poem? Is it the same who made the "portraits" of Lily in the blog section? Could it be you yourself? Because these things are good! I'd like to know more about them...
Lily
 
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Reply Thu 6 Aug, 2009 02:01 am
@Catchabula,
Catchabula;81449 wrote:
Lily, I have a direct question. Who made the illustration with this poem? Is it the same who made the "portraits" of Lily in the blog section? Could it be you yourself? Because these things are good! I'd like to know more about them...


Yes, it's me :shifty:. I have done all of my profil pictures, and my avatar picture, in Photo Shop. I use a bamboo pen tablet, so it's much easier for me to paint stuff on my computer. But I'm still not very used to it, I find it a lot easier to paint IRL. But I'm really lousy at making things look real, shadows and so on.
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Caroline
 
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Reply Thu 6 Aug, 2009 03:28 am
@Lily,
I think the shadows are really good. You're good Lily. I love this picture. You're inspirational!
inunokanojo
 
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Reply Mon 24 Aug, 2009 11:49 am
@Caroline,
It's a very good poem Lily. Smile But am I missing something? I don't see a picture.
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Lily
 
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Reply Mon 24 Aug, 2009 01:04 pm
@Lily,
I don't know why but it seems to have disapeared
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kennethamy
 
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Reply Mon 24 Aug, 2009 01:35 pm
@xris,
xris;81417 wrote:
When there is no pain in love,then its not love.


You are right on the button. Love is a real pain.
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