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On the verge to insanity

 
 
kerver
 
Reply Wed 12 Nov, 2003 10:15 pm
I sit here alone, with a guitar in hand
Try to forget all the days that I've had
Alone in my room
Is my life in one tune
Barried away, are the thoughts of you

Leave me, I'm alone, I'm ok
I think thats the way it should be
I won't bother you, don't bother me
I just need some time to feel free
Cause I am on the verge to insanity

I play the same song over in my mind
Thinking about you, what I left behind
I turn off the light, and I sit in the dark
The phone rings and I make a mad hell dart
I pick up the phone, and I here that it's you
And you said

Leave me, I'm alone, I'm ok
I think thats the way it should be
I won't bother you, don't bother me
I just need some time to feel free
Cause I am on the verge to insanity





Please analyze this in any or every way, pick it apart if u feel the need.
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T Rex
 
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Reply Sat 22 Nov, 2003 10:08 am
I can empathize with the desire to be left alone.
Our true self is within, and by our thoughts, and being bold enough to confront them with logic rather than emotion, we can actually solve alot of our own problems.
Having people around is an influence on our thoughts, and so gets in the way of finding our true self. A self that is underneath all the 'effects' that have been layered onto it by a lifetime of 'lessons'.

How would our personality be different if we had never met anyone else?
It's interesting to wonder. We can best find out by being alone.

In reference to insanity:
The foundation of all mental illness is the unwillingness to experience legitimate suffering. - Carl Jung

ie: If the suffering is allowed to run it's course short term, it will be better for our sanity in the long term. (Logical thought will allow us to determine what is legitimate suffering and what is not...)

The distance between insanity and genius is measured only by success
-James Bond Villain 18 Smile
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BlueMonkey
 
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Reply Thu 27 Nov, 2003 11:17 pm
Kerver

I like it. Simple with a little punch.

"of all" is a sweeping statment and therefore cannot be true. Now it maybe the bases for some mental illnesses but not all. I know.
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